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“Assalamu Alaykum Khalid.” The Sheikh said.
“Wa Alaykum As-Salam.” I answered.
“Where’s Khalil?” dad asked me.
“He’s playing basketball in the back with the other boys.” I answered.
“How does it feel?” the sheikh asked.
“How does what feel?”
“Your arm.”
“It doesn’t really hurt that much. It’s just annoying to have a cast on your arm and you cant do anything.
He gave me the papers that he was studying.
“Can you take these to my office? He asked me.
I took it and headed towards his office. I was a few yards away when I heard someone call me.
 
“I’m gona go inside.” I said after a while of playing.
I had noticed that Khalid wasn’t watching anymore so I went inside to look for him. I saw him walking towards the Sheikh’s office so I called out to him.
”Why did you go inside?” I asked him as I got closer.
He frowned at me. “Guess.”
I looked away sort of ashamed. “Hey I’m sorry. But we’re going to the park later. You’re gona come right?” we had just agreed on meeting there around Asr time. Hasan had thought it up and we agreed.
“Today? Who’s going?” Khalid asked.
“You want me to list everyone? Ok Hasan is coming, and Yusuf, Yunus, Zaki, and Zakir and Ahmed. I’m going if you’re gona go.”
“Ok, but….”
“Don’t worry we wont leave you out this time.” I assured him.
He nodded and walked towards the sheikh’s office. He came out in a few seconds. The Iqamah was just being called. We went to the Musallah to pray. After the Salah we waited for dad to come out.
 
Dad finally came out and we headed home. I went upstairs and Khalid followed.
“I don’t feel safe knowing that Kevin Killer is out in this world with us.” Khalid said all of a sudden.
“The boss is not found yet either.”
I heard my cell phone ring. “Where is it?” I asked.
“It’s on top of the dresser.” Khalid replied. I got it and answered it.
“Assalamu Alaykum.” I heard Ahmed’s voice.
“Wa Alaykum Assalam.”
“I heard you were back so I was checking on you. How’s Khalid?”
“He’s fine.”
“Didn’t he break his hand?”
“He broke his collarbone. And he’s ok right now.”
“Yusuf called me and said to come to the park today at Asr. What’s going on?” he asked.
“Nothing. We just wana get together at the park. No harm.”
“Ok. I’ll be there, and so will dad. Aisha is driving me crazy here. So I’ll do anything to get away. Say Salam to Khalid for me.”
“Ok. Bye.”
“See you later.”
Khalid looked up from his book. “Who was that?” he asked me.
“Ahmed. He sends his Salams.” I said as I walked over to our closet. I glanced at the football in the corner. Too bad, I thought. Khalid and I always use to take it to the backyard and play when ever we where bored, but we cant do that now. It seemed like everything is changing in this world.
“I’m going outside.” I said as I closed the door behind me. I opened the porch door and went out sitting on the front steps.
 
“I’m going outside.” I said as I closed the door behind me. I opened the porch door and went out sitting on the front steps. A squirrel came down next to my feet. I watched it quietly. It started nibbling on a small acorn that it was holding in its hands. It watched me from the corner of my eye. I looked up to see a bird flying down and landing on the small birdfeeder Khadeejah had made. I sometimes use to wish that I was a bird. So free and careless. It doesn’t have any problems except trying to find it’s food and staying away from trouble. The squirrel ran away as I stood up and walked around the yard. The flowers where shriveling up. I took the hose and started watering them. When I was done I went back inside the house.
“You want to go now?” dad asked me.
“Where?” I asked.
“To the park. Didn’t you tell me that’s where we were going?”
“Oh yeah. I’ll get Khalid.” I went upstairs. Khalid was standing at the window looking out.
“Come on Khalid. We’re leaving.”
He turned around and followed me out.
When we got to the park Yusuf and Yunus were already there helping there dad barbeque. They waved when they saw us.
“Assalamu Alaykum.” Dad called as we got nearer.
“Wa Alaykum Assalam.” They answered.
 
Yusuf was carrying a Frisbee in his hand. “Let’s go play with it next to the lake while we wait for the other boys to come.” Then he glanced at Khalid who was frowning. “You can play with your right hand. You only need one arm to catch it.” He said as he led the way to the lake.
“Be careful.” Dad called after us.
The lake was behind some woods. So to get there you had to go through all these trees and bushes. We had always hanged out near the lake.
We played while talking at the same time.
“Catch!” Yusuf said as he threw it towards me. It flew over my head and into the water. It landed a few feet from the shore.
“Go fetch, Yusuf.” Yunus teased.
“Why me?” he complained.
“You threw it. Besides it’s not far from shore you can wade in the water.”
Yusuf rolled up his jeans and waded over and got it.
“Why are you in the water Yusuf?” I heard someone ask. Hasan was standing behind me.
“I didn’t even hear you coming.” I said.
“Why is he in the water?”
“He threw the Frisbee in so he has to go get it.”
I looked back at Yusuf. He was only a few feet from the shore when he slipped on something underwater. He waved his hands wildly as he fell back. Splash! He was all wet. We couldn’t help it; we all started laughing. He came out angrily. He was trenched. We heard some laughs behind us. Ahmed, Zaki and Zakir were walking towards us.
“What happened to you?” Zakir asked.
“Don’t you know this is not a swimming pool Yusuf?” Zaki joked.
“Shut up! It’s not funny.” Yusuf said angrily. He stomped away from us. We were all still smiling. Yunus walked over to him.
“There are some spare clothes in the trunk of the car. You can go change in the bathroom or you can wait here. The sun will dry you off in a few seconds.” He laughed.
Yusuf stomped towards the woods to the car.
“Why did he get into the lake in the first place?” Ahmed asked.
“We were playing with the Frisbee and he threw it into the water so he had to go get it.” Khalid explained.
“Where is it right now?”
“The Frisbee? I think he took it with him.” Yunus said.
We all sat down and waited for him to come back. We expected him to be angry. But when he came back he was carrying a big plate.
“Dad made some hotdogs.” He said as he gave each of us one and took one for him self. He sat down next to me. He was wearing dry clothes now and seemed to have forgotten about the fact that he had fallen into the lake. He ate his hotdog silently as we talked.
“Did the police find where Kevin Killer is?” Zakir asked.
“I don’t think so.” Khalid answered.
“Wouldn’t it be cool if we were the ones who found out where he is?”
“We could. We can set up a trap for him right now.” Hasan spoke up.
Yunus nodded. “Yeah but how? That guy’s not easily tricked.”
“I have a plan. You guys want to hear it?” Hasan asked. We all nodded.
“Ok. You know Kevin thinks that Yunus and I are still on his side? Well that’s a good advantage for us. I can call him right now and make up some story to get him to meet me here at the park. Then we can trap him and call the police.” He said as he looked around to see what we would say.
“Easier said than done.” Yusuf mumbled.
“No. it might work…” Yunus started.
“It might. And if it doesn’t he’ll shoot every one of us. Then what?” Yusuf said.
 
“Can you not interrupt me, Yusuf?” Yunus asked. “Ok. Listen. We can tell him that Amin had left yesterday, since he still doesn’t know about that. And we could say that Amin had left a package and he asked us to give it to Kevin.”
“Yeah. Then we can say to meet us at the park in the woods. He wont get suspicious then.” Hasan finished off.
“That’s good. Just pray that it works.” Zaki said.
“Ok. I’ll call him.” Yunus said as he took out his cell phone.
“No. I’ll call him.” Hasan said as he took the cell phone from him. He walked away some paces and called. We waited silently until he came back.
His face was lit up. “It worked. He’s coming right now in a fifteen minutes. He said he’s passing by with the boss so he can stop and come here.” Hasan said. Then he started giving out orders.
“Ok someone has to go up a tree over there and signal us if they’re coming or not. Maybe Khalil or Yusuf?” he said.
Yusuf pushed me forward. “You go.” He said.
“Wait. Before you go, you need to know the rest of the plans. When we see the signal, I’ll go forward with Yunus. The rest of you guys come up and hide behind a tree or something. When I signal you come out and attack. Get it?” Hasan explained. We all nodded.
“What’s your signal going to be?” Zakir asked.
“Um… I’ll pull my left ear ok?” Hasan grinned sheepishly.
“Some one has to go and call dad and them.” Ahmed spoke up.
“How about…Khalid.” Yunus picked.
“Problem.” Yusuf said. We all turned towards him.
“You don’t have a package.” He snickered. Hasan thought furiously.
“We have a small empty package in the car. Who can run fast enough to the car and get it in a three minutes? We’re wasting time here?” Zaki asked.
Yusuf volunteered and in a few minutes he was back carrying a small brown box. He tried his best to control his breathing as he handed Hasan the box.
“Come on. We don’t have time. Khalil you go to the tree. You can use this to signal.” He said as he gave me a small mirror. I took it and ran to the tree with the most leaves and climbed up. I only waited for about ten minutes when I saw two men coming. With my heart beating I started signaling towards the shore. I did this a couple of times to make sure that they got it. I heard a twig snap under me. Great! They just had to wait for Hasan under my tree.
“Where is that boy?” Kevin asked impatiently.
“He better hurry up. Otherwise he’s in trouble. And I can’t believe Amin left. He was really good.” Boss stated.
“Who cares about him? I got all my men in jail because of those boys. If I ever get my hands on them…” Kevin didn’t finish his sentence. He just shook his head and leaned against the tree waiting. I slowly took the mirror and signaled again just in case they didn’t see it the first time.
“Did he tell you a specific location?” Boss asked him. Kevin shook his head.
“It’s gona be night time by the time we get to Washington if that boy doesn’t hurry up.” He said looking up at the sky. I held my breath hoping he wouldn’t see me. Then I had a sudden urge to sneeze. I tried my most best not to but I couldn’t. I tried muffling it but it was loud enough for both men to look up.
 
i might be able to finish the whole thing tommorow so inshallah am gona post alot then :) *MAYBE* (don't get your hopes up too high ;D)
and i couldnt post anything yesterday cuz or internet wasn't working

Ma'salamah :)
 
Kevin’s face filled with fury. “Get down.” He ordered. I didn’t move.
Just like I thought he took out his gun. “Get down or I’ll shoot.”
I climbed down slowly then jumped a few feet away from them.
“Don’t move, or I’ll blast your brains out.” He said as they both walked closer to me.
“Why are you here?” he asked.
“I came here with my friends to hang out. It’s a public place.” I answered.
“Don’t try to act smart. Why were you up the tree?” the boss asked.
I shrugged. “When has it become a crime to climb trees?”
“Where are your friends?” Kevin asked.
I shrugged again. Then I heard a sound behind me. I turned my head and saw Hasan walking towards us. His face looked surprised. Yunus was behind him carrying the package.
“What is he doing here?” Hasan asked angrily.
You’re such a good actor. I thought to my self.
“That’s what I would like to know. Well I got my hands on him and this time he’s not getting another chance to escape.” Kevin snarled.
I stared at him trying to hide a smile. I saw Yusuf’s head poke our from a tree then he went back.
“Did you bring the package?” the Boss asked.
“Yeah.” Hasan said as he pointed towards Yunus.
“Give it to me.” Kevin said as he lowered his gun and took a step towards Yunus. Hasan lifted his hand to scratch his head but I had already taken the chance and sent a loose kick towards Kevin’s hand. His grip loosened and the gun fell into a pile of leaves. The rest of the boys were out in a second. They all came out from different sides trapping the two men in a circle.
“You stupid traitor! You planned this! I should have never trusted you!” Kevin shouted in rage. The boss was equally mad. Yusuf walked closer to Kevin. He was carrying two sticks and I wondered what he was going to do. He grinned at me and poked the two men in the back.
“Don’t move or I’ll shoot.” He said in his toughest voice. He was trying his best not to laugh. The boss fell for it and raised his hands in surrender. Kevin kept still for a second then he whirled around throwing Yusuf off balance.
“Don’t try to play games with me boy. I know how a gun looks and feels.” He snarled while his eyes scanned the ground. I knew he was looking for his gun. I stepped up in front of where the gun was lying so he couldn’t see it but it was too late. With raised fists he charged towards me. I got ready for the clash. He was only a foot away from me when he was jerked back from the back of his shirt by Hasan. Hasan placed him in a headlock and Yunus ran forward to help him. He was about to grab his legs but Kevin kicked at him and Yunus fell back. Soon we were all fighting against Kevin and the boss but they were as strong as five oxen. I knew I was going to be sore with bruises later. The light was dim so we could hardly tell who we were fighting. Then
Then we heard a shout. For a minute everyone paused and looked up.
Khalid was standing there with some rope and the gun in his hand. His face was grim and cold as he stared at Kevin Killer.
 
“Sit there.” Khalid said as he pointed with the gun. “You too.” He looked back at the Boss. They both complied.
“Tie them up.” He said as he threw me the rope. “Don’t try anything.” He warned the two men. I started with the boss. Then I moved on to Kevin. I tied up their hands and their legs together. I looked up as we heard some sirens. The Boss’s face was filled with terror while Kevin stared at Khalid menacingly.
I snickered at him. “You’re the one who’s not gona have a chance to escape.” He just glared at me.
“If I ever get out of jail I’ll get back at you twins. You’ll see.” He threatened.
“If you get out. There’s a fat chance of that. You got a lot of things against you.” We could see some police men running towards us. Our dads’ were behind them looking worried.
“Are you boys ok?” Amu Jihad asked. We all nodded.
“I’ll take that.” One officer said as he pointed to the gun in Khalid’s hand. They took of the rope from the men’s feet and hands and handcuffed them. Then after asking us a few questions they took them away. We all walked back to the parking lot.
“I’m proud of what you boys did but that was really dangerous.” Dad reprimanded us.
“At lest we got the whole gang in jail. We won’t have to worry about them anymore.” Yunus said.
“Alhamdulillah.” Amu Jihad said.
After a while we all went home. Dad told everything that happened to mom who was worried even though it was all over.
I went upstairs with Khalid. he turned to me after a while and smiled.
“We did it right? We don’t have to worry about them.” I said.
“No, bro. I did it. You ruined the whole plan by sneezing.” He answered. I frowned. He laughed and pointed at something on top of our dresser. I glanced at it and smiled. The poster he drew the day we fought was still there.

the end? :-\ ^o)
 
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:D:sl:MasyaAllah. The story is really syiok. (in Malaysia syiok means that means nice, good adictive and all that). I hope the story doesn't end here. Make a sequel or new one please. I'm already addicted to your writing.
Please write more.:)
 
ohhhhhhh its finished but its happy ending though i love it and am waiting for another one sister.
 

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