poem...no title

[Whatsthepoint]

Not only you are funny, you're a poet as well.
*pets* me one more time.

 

[sevgi]

Not only you are funny, you're a poet as well.
*pets* me one more time.

Hehe...thanks.

I'm glad you know the call... but it doesn't count if you do it.

*pets*

 

[Whatsthepoint]

Hehe...thanks.

I'm glad you know the call... but it doesn't count if you do it.

*pets*

That was a request, not a sentence.
Should have said pet me again.
what does pet eman?

 

[sevgi]

That was a request, not a sentence.
Should have said pet me again.
what does pet eman?

Hahaha...

Ok, turn on your visual imagination.

Picture a cat sitting beside the pompous chair of a very powerful woman. Picture her brushing its head with her hand...She is petting her cat.



You aren't my cat. lol. Its like a pat on the back...but it implies that I am your master.

 

[Whatsthepoint]

Hahaha...

Ok, turn on your visual imagination.

Picture a cat sitting beside the pompous chair of a very powerful woman. Picture her brushing its head with her hand...She is petting her cat.



You aren't my cat. lol. Its like a pat on the back...but it implies that I am your master.

žoh:mmokay:
ok, don't pet me any further, woman.

 

[sevgi]

žoh:mmokay:
ok, don't pet me any further, woman.

Hah! Ok...

I need a new pet...hmmm

Well atleast you like my poem. Thank you

 

[Ansariyah]

It's been a while since I've posted anything in here. Here's a poem which probably only makes sense to me and God...when I wrote it sitting outside at like 3am a few nights ago.

There is no wind tonight,
I sit here gazing at the sky amid solid aether,
I live in a poem where love exits and life is bliss,
Makes me sway as the nightfall descends and hubris ascends,
I live in God’s mercy,
His smile mine own,
I practice true magic, my truth unknown,
I hold out my hand and the aether is quick,
His voice, my voice,
In the air so thick.

Wow That blew me away...truly amazing. MashaALlah.

 

[Cabdullahi]

the construction is superb and the words you chose mesh perfectly with what ur trying to portray..........TOP NOTCH

 

[sevgi]

Thank you.

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

im going to admit something.


i never really digested a poem of yours in silence and taken the time to appreciate it.

but now that i have, subhanAllah... it really is something i can relate to...

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

There is no wind tonight,
I sit here gazing at the sky amid solid aether,
I live in a poem where love exits and life is bliss,
Makes me sway as the nightfall descends and hubris ascends,
I live in God’s mercy,
His smile mine own,
I practice true magic, my truth unknown,
I hold out my hand and the aether is quick,
His voice, my voice,
In the air so thick.

wahahaaaooowwwwwwwwww

ohh myyyyy

oh:



oh: !!!!!


subhanAllaaah!!


sis i dont think ive read a poem i liked this much in time, mashAllaah !!!

trust me, i NEVER comment unless i mean it


ps: using that bold part on msn :thumbs_up it resounds such sincerity subhanAllaah

 

[sevgi]

Oh my.

Feeding the ego is never a good thing.

It is really a gift not a skill. I just write when it comes to me. I know how absolutely fruity that sounds..but it's true.

I am so glad you liked it. You may use it as you wish on msn or watever.

I shall continue to share as I see fit.

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Ws.

 

[Pomak]

Nice poems, anyone else have any poems to share?

 

[sevgi]

Nice poems, anyone else have any poems to share?

There are many many poems threads in here. Have a search through.

 

[sevgi]

I don't think this is a poem...

So lost,
Keeping silent seems pointless,
I speak;yap, to out-scream the pain.

I hide from me,
but from you I cannot.
I bleed from within
but feel it? I do not.

I can't process this one,
I'm definitely failing now
I've lost all I've built,
It's not them, this time
I'm the fault....

I deserve nothing but pain...
I can't tell a soul,
I think I've lost game
and I don't want to play again.

 

[sevgi]

Completely in denial I set out in the morn,
Questioning the likes of things I should just leave alone.
Making faces at these people who think they know what is,
Frowning upon those who touch you and make you freeze.

I fill myself with space so it gets hard to reach me,
Others breeze past, blind to what they see.
I'm a sister- clearly, blatantly, blunty- I'm in your face,
But who can see me and the anguish I cover with my grace.

Who heard that sound; that cry I just made?
They don't even notice as my inner light fades.
The windows to the soul have been placed upon my face-
But alas they lie, hidden so well behind dark shades.

The next time you pass by one from your community,
Share a smile, a hello, an expression of some unity.
Perhaps they have a story to tell, something you should know,
Perhaps they have a prayer to make, for you and those who may follow.

 

[alcurad]

why so sad?

 

[sevgi]

Not sad. Upset.

Why? No reason I'd like to share here.

 

[alcurad]

perhaps we can help.

 

[sevgi]

perhaps we can help.

You read my poem and asked about my well-being. That is help enough.

Bless you.