Poetry: Sincere Advice

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Sincere Advice
By: Hafiz Rashad Abdullah

In this small world, there are many people, who are in need,
What prevents us the most is just our simple greed,
Hold your desires, be steadfast,
Don’t hold on, but let go to your past,

Heed this warning, do not ignore,
Most surely, this is good for you, I do implore,
Some pass with a frown or taunt,
Not realizing your need and want,

Love, Love and not hate,
Surely, it is the Satan’s bait,
And if it so happens that they taunt you for your good,
Walk by with honor and dignity, you should,

Remember, seclusion is better than bad company,
And most surely, good company is better than seclusion,
Make your life worthwhile,
Be clean of sins, and let not you become as filthy as bile,

Remember, your example is being watched by those around,
And it is best to compromise, rather than a pound,
Follow these rules wherever you may be,
Whether it be on land or be at sea,

Mark Twain once said, “Be Yourself”,
Earnest are his words, worth more than all of his books on a shelf,
Some buy to make a good impression,
Fail to realize it is only a few seconds of attention,

Everything in this planet is temporary,
Even the big houses, or even that one small raspberry,
Our clothes, cars, items, materialistic items, or even our life,
Shall soon perish, only to keep what is left of our honor and strife,

The most honorable act is the one done for the sincere goodness for yourself and others,
Not for the world to see, but for the benefit of your worldwide sisters and brothers,
This world is but a large family,
And no one is greater than one next door with the Toyota Camry,


This is but sincere advice,
Comes from my heart, and not her head lice,
Follow it; teach it to others with the same affection,
It will, undoubtedly, leave an impact to whomever you may teach it to, of whatever profession.
 
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:bump1: Darn it, I can't edit my post. Well, I meant it's by me.
 
like it like it! i think its great bro!...well done. i liked some of the words, not perfect..(nothin is) but i loved the honest message!.....thoughtproking. LOL at the headlice thing.
 
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very nice bro, like the way you extend sentences at end but keep rythym, well done
 
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MashAllah would you like to donate that to LIs poetry book ?

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You are going to sell it my bro so why not ? Right Tk tony ?

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Head lice?? :S :S :S ...Not sure I get that part. Other than that, GREAT job bro! Keep it up. Love the message you are trying to get across...very honest and logical ... :)
 
Jazakallah. Wrote it a few years back for school! I still remember i got a 49/50. That one stupid point... She took it off because of that one line that doesn't rhyme. Isn't that unfair?
 

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