Shayiri

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:salamext:

Aitbaar na karna tum kisi par "Muj4h1d4"
Yahaan loug badal jaate hain mausam ki tarha

 

[^..sTr!vEr..^]

Ka'aba kis muun se jao gay Ghalib
sharam tum ko magar aati nahi

 

[chacha_jalebi]

^ lol dunno y that sounded funny


usne kaha dil mey hai kya..
Maine Kaha Hasrat Teri

usne kaha dekhte kya ho..
Maine Kaha Soorat Teri

usne kaha chahte ho kya..
Maine Kaha Hidmat Teri

usne kaha pach taega..
Maine Kaha Ok Bye na lol
Maine Kaha Kismat Meri

 

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:salamext:

that woz funny :lol:

 

[Khayal]

^ lol dunno y that sounded funny


usne kaha dil mey hai kya..
Maine Kaha Hasrat Teri

usne kaha dekhte kya ho..
Maine Kaha Soorat Teri

usne kaha chahte ho kya..
Maine Kaha Hidmat Teri ( Hidmat nahein, Kidmat hota hai..)

usne kaha pach taega..
Maine Kaha Ok Bye na lol
Maine Kaha Kismat Meri

:lol:

Sab ko itna hee naik, khidmatguzar huna chahiey hai.....:blind:




.

 

[chacha_jalebi]

lol acha,

aisey bhi spellin ho sakthi hai... khidmat

 

[H4RUN]

One has re entered this thread Brace yourselves






























Pane se khone ka maza aur hai,
Band Ankho se dekhne ka maza aur hai,
Asu bane lafz Aur lafz gazal,
Teri yadon ke sath jine ka maza kuch aur hai


over and out

 

[waji]

^^ is shayir kah baad mujhay yeh shayir mind main aaya

Ahh lay nazar Zookh e nazar khoob hay lakin
jo shayh kee hakeqat ko na samjhay woh nazar kiya

 

[Rafeeq]

i m sorry to say, but this is not shaery as per its nature

 

[Rafeeq]

i m sorry if i hurt u all, but poetry should like poetry

 

[chacha_jalebi]

mere liye ek shayair ne yeh liki, na lol jokess, but chek it out

Mat Muskurao itna,
ke phoolon ko khabar lag jaye,
Ke kare woh tumhari Tareef,
Aur tumhe nazar lag jaye

 

[maram]

aatish parast kehte hain ahle jahan mujhe
sar garm e nala haye sharar bar dekh kar

in aablon se paon ke ghabra gaya tha main
jee khush hua hai rah ko purkhar dekh kar​

 

[Gangster No.1]

yea faaram buht paagal hai.
bas kar.

lol

 

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...


Pane se khone ka maza aur hai,
Band Ankho se dekhne ka maza aur hai,
Asu bane lafz Aur lafz gazal,
Teri yadon ke sath jine ka maza kuch aur hai

...

:salamext:

Thats so true...kya baat hai bhai, itna such shair....Shukriya

 

[H4RUN]

:salamext:

Thats so true...kya baat hai bhai, itna such shair....Shukriya

;D
;D
It better be 'so true' cos i just copied what you wrote some time ago This is 2 gud 2 be true erm jazaakAllah khair

 

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:salamext:

i knw lolz but itz stil sik poem

 

[waji]

^^ rafeeq bhai phir app hi bata dain kay kaysee shayiri karain

yeh shahadaat gah e ulfat main kadam rakhna hay
loogh asaan samajhtain hain Musalmaan hona

 

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:salamext:

hus rafeeq bhai? :S

 

[H4RUN]

:salamext:

hus rafeeq bhai? :S

aap?:blind: laying:

 

[waji]

See earlier post
u find it how is Rafeeq