Smiling Eyes

[Ansariyah]

Those Smiling Eyes...
lower me the skys
Dazzling like the sunrise
Overpowering me like the moonrise
Gifting me an unexpected surprise
Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
Silenced, i'm brought to appease
no tease, something is on arise
My lows, now my highs
Speechless, my soul sighs
As my heart ponders, such ease?
Can there be an un'seen paradise
When those eyes
have lowered me the skys.
​

author: me​

 

[Cabdullahi]

nice mashallah!...........ramadan kareem

 

[Ansariyah]

thanks^ I havent written a poem in ages.
Ramadan Mubarak!

 

[nebula]

mashallah thats gd :thumbs_up

 

[Gubbleknucker]

I like it.

It makes me try to picture the eyes, but doesn't give enough information to do so, so it made my brain try about a thousand possibilities and give up, which produces a rather interesting feeling.

Of course, it's more focused on the emotion.

 

[Snowflake]

I like a lot! MashaAllah you clever girl!

 

[- IqRa -]

MashaAllaah that is nice poetry.

 

[Sahabiyaat]

well dun 'nooora'!
me likes

 

[- IqRa -]

Those Smiling Eyes...
lower me the skys
Dazzling like the sunrise
Overpowering me like the moonrise
Gifting me an unexpected surprise
Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
Silenced, i'm brought to appease
no tease, something is on arise
My lows, now my highs
Speechless, my soul sighs
As my heart ponders, such ease?
Can there be an un'seen paradise
When those eyes
have lowered me the skys.
​

author: yanoorah​

So it can be read

 

[Misz_Muslimah]

Those Smiling Eyes...
lower me the skys
Dazzling like the sunrise
Overpowering me like the moonrise
Gifting me an unexpected surprise
Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas
Silenced, i'm brought to appease
no tease, something is on arise
My lows, now my highs
Speechless, my soul sighs
As my heart ponders, such ease?
Can there be an un'seen paradise
When those eyes
have lowered me the skys.
​

author: me​

Mashallah sister Yaroonah

 

[Ansariyah]

So it can be read

I felt emberrassed to make it bigger, I know u asked. I did do it actually but it looked massive, but now u did it I dont mind.: p

Jzk to all

 

[Alphadude]

mashallah very nice poem did you write this your self? if yes your very tallented sister

 

[Tony]

Whispered through a breeze
Carried by the waves of the seas




^^^^ Beautiful^^^^^
excellent poem sister, really like it

 

[جوري]

well done yanoorah although I should have to beat you up for having me strain my eyes to the point of a migraine ....

 

[alcurad]

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[Beardo]

Masha'Allah! Love the theme too!! Keep it up, and please do write some more to share.

 

[Ansariyah]

well done yanoorah although I should have to beat you up for having me strain my eyes to the point of a migraine ....

oops sorry my dear sis:wub:..I used the garamond font it makes it small.:embarrass

mashallah very nice poem did you write this your self? if yes your very tallented sister

yes
jzk

 

[Ansariyah]

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