Some of my art work

[S.Belle]

I would like to post some things that I have drawn/ painted.
To all my artistic bro/sis criticism and tips are more than welcomed.

This is called Tumbling Vases

http://img832.imageshack.us/i/picture008uk.jpg/

 

[Hayaa]

I really like it! Did you use pastels/charcoal?

 

[S.Belle]

really like it! Did you use pastels/charcoal?

Thanks
charcoal

 

[tango92]

my artistic opinion in this:

the colours used are black and white. and vases have been drawn. indeed...

 

[Ğħαrєєвαħ]

Aslaamu alaaykum

Masha`Allaah that painting/drawing is awesome

Jazakallahu Khaayr for sharing, i love art its really geeky and fun!

My criticism is that they are colourless! it would look awesome like your colourful display pic if they had some geeky colours :-\ : D

wa alaaykum salaam

 

[tango92]

you could show the vases tumbling into a black hole. that wud be super cool....

 

[S.Belle]

you could show the vases tumbling into a black hole. that wud be super cool....

that would have been cool!

Aslaamu alaaykum Masha`Allaah that painting/drawing is awesome Jazakallahu Khaayr for sharing, i love art its really geeky and fun! My criticism is that they are colourless! it would look awesome like your colourful display pic if they had some geeky colours : D wa alaaykum salaam

Yea but this was actually a project I had to do in school and the teacher said we could only use charcoal...but I did do a repainting of this in a red-ish watercolor....if i can find it i will post it inshallah

 

[Ğħαrєєвαħ]

Insha`Allaah

i would love to see it sis!

 

[S.Belle]

^ um I dont see it in my portfolio so i think i threw it away....or its hiding somewhere unknown lol

 

[Ğħαrєєвαħ]

^its okay sis no probs indeed

and masha`Allaah that looks really nice, i love it, no geeky "criticism" this time :-\

 

[أحمد]

you could show the vases tumbling into a black hole. that wud be super cool....

Two quick changes in paint.net.

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[أحمد]

Yea but this was actually a project I had to do in school and the teacher said we could only use charcoal...but I did do a repainting of this in a red-ish watercolor....if i can find it i will post it inshallah

Was it similar to this?



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[S.Belle]

Was it similar to this?

no it was more of a ketchup burgundy red and not as dark
I think i will just repaint it later today inshallah

I LOVE what you did to the painting (the whirl) it looks even better.

 

[Woodrow]

I would like to post some things that I have drawn/ painted.
To all my artistic bro/sis criticism and tips are more than welcomed.

This is called Tumbling Vases

http://img832.imageshack.us/i/picture008uk.jpg/

You have a very good eye for composition. A person's eyes are drawn to the center vase no matter were they look. I like Black and white art work as it is more dramatic. Requires much more use of form and shape to obtain interest, but once interest is developed, it has a bit of mystique that can not be achieved in a colored work.

If you do desire to colorize it. use the color very sparingly an subtle. Making the vase a very light tone Burnt umber would have a very dramatic effect. The first impact would be the viewers eye woul immediatly be drawn to that point, but the flow of the design would lead them to the center vase and from there to the overall picture. I think it would be quite dramatic.

 

[S.Belle]

I like Black and white art work as it is more dramatic.

exactly thats why i mostly do black and white because i think its rather refreshing and crisp..if that makes any sense.
Thanks maybe I will try a burnt amber color

Thanks everyone for commenting and giving tips
May Allah bless you all

 

[Woodrow]

If you decide to colorize I believe it is best to also simlplify to avoid it from becoming Gaudy. But, gaudy can also be good if it gives a desired effect.

What I would do in terms of coloring and simplifying.

This:

or this at the most:

 

[أحمد]

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[GuestFellow]

Was it similar to this?



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That looks like Mila's art...except red. Yes I know I am pointing out the obvious...how did you change the colour like that?

 

[أحمد]

That looks like Mila's art...except red. Yes I know I am pointing out the obvious...how did you change the colour like that?

Using paint.net; it takes a few seconds. Firstly, select a colour, then go to effects, render and choose to cloud a colour over or with the image.

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[GuestFellow]

^

Thanks

I was thinking how you managed to change the colour... o_o