The Path that led me to Allaah. - A Prequel to the heart-break series -

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One day i came from outside and my dad was on the computer. My sister came and told me that my mate was online, and that he was speaking to my dad.

I went to the main room and found that what she said was true, to an extent..

So how are you uncle?


I'm fine thx, u?


i'm good. So where's your son?


He's coming now, one minute.


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He got up, I rushed to sit down and told the person that i'd be right back - while everyone stared at me -, i logged off, closed the Messenger program and went to my room.


Dad, you can come back on it now, sorry. I smiled and whizzed past.


I logged in again, my heart was beating fast..

lol ur wel krazy!


why?


that was my dad u were chatting to lol, just imagine he found out?


lol i thought you were on though..


i dont know how it happened, my email account logged in by itself on windows msn, my dad switched on the comp. thats probably how it happened.

so you spoken to my dad now lol..


loll he's a chiller.


i was shocked when it happened.. i thought it was obvious by your nick that you was female, its kool u never used pink or purple text today init?


lol yeh.


its good it was windows msn.. if it was real msn they would see your display pic..



lolllll joka.



that was well close.. anyway wa u been up2?


nothing really, was just waitin for ya to come on.


thx.. anyway if somthin like this happens again, just log out plz, okay?


lol ok.. that was funny though.


lol anyway, i'll be on later tonight. tke cre.


ayt.. u2, mwah.


lol.. thx, cya.


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Bro is this ur own personal story.

man keep it coming, u def know how to write, sik. cant wait for the nxt part.

 

[Tania]

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I couldn't understand what was right upto one extent:-[

 

[mustafaisb]

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:salamext: Can't wait for the next post. :wasalamex

 

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:salamext:

Part 3


I logged in, and her status was on busy.. should i start the conversation?


Hey.


wait up, i'm busy.


oh ok.



I opened a conversation with my mate from school;


hey.. u ok?


yeh man, u?


i'm good man, u know the gyal i asked u about a while back, shes busy.


lol they got their times man, probably doing something.


true.. i've known her for a few months now, almost like half a year.


kool bruv. don't get too attatched to them, in the end it's not worth it.


its too late to say that now, i already am..


alright man, its up2u init. i've never been through dis so i dno.


hm.. shes different though.


yeah, thats what they all say. absence makes the heart go fonder.


yeh.. tru tru.

i wonder what's keeping her busy for so long..


i dno man.


*silence*


not too sure. lisen, everythin wil be ok.


yeh.. hope so.


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i moved to the other window.

hey, u finished with what u were doin?


no, listen we'll talk inabit. i gota go.

*she went offline*



She's gone off..


alright, don't worry about it too much, k?


k..


listen, i've known u for a few years now.. you've been through more than this before.


no i havn't..


yeh u have.


i think she's back online again! listen, i'll add her in this convo and you ask her why she doesn't talk to me okay?


ok man.

S has been added into the conversation.

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Hey.


Hi..


yo.


S, this is my m8 from school. We've known each other for a few years now.


sup?


nuthin much, listen. is everythin ok? he's worried about ya.


what do you mean?


he wants you to talk to him.


what? i already do.


how come u been busy lately.


i was on the phone.


alright, my bad.


k, thats what is bruv. it was just a gal thing.


thx..

S has left the conversation.
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more more..

 

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She's gone again..


listen, log out for abit.. come back later and she might be in a better mood.


Ok.. thanks for your help man.


no worries.



*Logged Out*



did i do something wrong?


what if she thought i wasn't worth it afterall?


maybe she's just busy..



this was a sad day...




It was raining the next morning, cold and wet.

It was school, again. A long day, couldn't really focus on anything. I felt as if i was half dead, not really knowing what's going on around me.


I met up with my mate, the one who tried to help. He just kept saying that everything would be okay, it wasn't his fault.. he'd just never been there before. That's all he could do.

Obviously, even if you tell the person that it will get better, they wish that could happen, but do they really believe it? No, rarely.



I came back home after a long day, it was a routine now. Switched on the comp, and logged in.


She was online aswell, i wanted to talk but i stayed quiet... until i felt i had no control over myself.


Hey..


sup.


You all k?


yeh, u?


u sure? it looked like something happened yesterday..


yeh am gud.


was u on the phone?


yeh, i know this guy. he's proper buff.


what does that mean?


it means fit (good looking)


oh..
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sorry there kinda short.. i'm working on making the mini chapters abit more longer from now insha Allaah..


thats enough for today i think..

 

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thats enough for today i think.

nooooooooooooo. come on bro one more man..

 

[Nσσя'υℓ Jαииαн]

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nooo its not enuff, mad addicting lolol. Moreeeeeeee please

 

[Tania]

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How worried he is :-[

 

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Okay jazaak Allaah khayr (may Allaah reward you all) for the positive feedback.


If you read the intro on the first page, i asked you all to do something.

Throughout the story, i want you to keep an eye on the main character. The way he speaks, what he goes through, and how his friends change him - for the better, or for the worse? What are the consequences for that?

Relate it to yourself, and reflect. See how your friends can influence you, and how something which you might have had a good intention for, it wasn't that good afterall - since it lead to many more evils. Reflect, and try to see how there may be something which you dislike, yet Allaah has placed in it much good, and there may be something you like, which is harmful for you. Allaah knows and we do not know.

I want you guys to reflect and explain how you think the character's changed:


i.e.

Part 1: Character was like this..

Part 2: Character then was like this..

Part 3: The character is like this..
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Explanation: Then i want you to summarise how the character has changed overall, it just has to be a few sentences if you want. For the better, for the worse? In what way is it for the better, or in what way is it for the worse? Or maybe both?


Quote the last post number which you read from so we know which part you're reflecting from (the post number is on the top right hand side of every post i.e. (#1.)

As the story progresses, you might notice some more changes - so you might have to update your opinions insha Allaah.



Once i get 5 opinions, insha Allaah (God willing) the next part will be added.

 

[Malaikah]

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Great, he gets us addicted to his story, then he forces us to work for the rest. lol smart.

My opinion- well he doesn't seem to have changed much in terms of religion... he seems pretty much the same so far, the main difference I noticed is that he has become more confident with himself, more out spoken, more popular, not as shy as before... I think this change also open the doors for him getting involved with this girl... more than he would have at the start of the story... well thats what I understood anyway.

Oh, and the most obvious conclusion I can make- msn is BIG FITNAH.

now four more people, get posting!!

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

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assalamu alaikum ya shei..... old man

subhanAllah

chapter 1 = he was everything i respect/admire and love. he was a chilla, the type o kid i cud look at with a happy full heart and stroke his hair and give him a noogie n that ! so pure man, didnt wanna hurt feelings ... i mean who does, theres always that shaytaan poking in trying to make evil seem like the right thing to do. may Allah guide us and protect us from shaytaan. he seemed like his still on the right track, he didnt lose himself, he kept it fillah (deleted the girl and tried to keep it halaal). it was good ALhamdulillah

chapter 2 = random fish added him, its annoyin when that happens innit... coz you know its not right but at the same times your curious. Kamaluddin put it beautifully... he said theres always this voice thats telling you that your doing the wrong thing.. its jus up to you to heed it... evil can never lead to anything good like a marriage. anyway he got propa attached to the girl... she started teachin him words and stuff, he slowly started gettin into the whole popular scene, poor stupid kid (jk, his blessed, its like somethin everyone goes thru these days...)

chapter 3 = now his gettin paranoid.. his too attached to this girl, his losing all self confidence and most probably forgot Allah completely by now... no doubt the girls the only thing in his mind.




how is it people give their hearts to others when it should be for Allah alone....

lol fi-sab this thread propa put me off marriage lolll now i just wanna go jannah jazakAllah khair!!!! LoL!! serious... this thread is good for your emaan..

 

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assalamu alaikum ya shei..... old man

lolll joka.

how is it people give their hearts to others when it should be for Allah alone....

yeh, we lose everyone except the One who is 4eva and neva dies. And He loves us, so why shouldn't we be thankful to Him.

i propa luv this verse:

Qur'an 14: 7. And (remember) when your Lord proclaimed: "If you give thanks (by accepting Faith and worshipping none but Allâh), I will give you more (of My Blessings), but if you are thankless (i.e. disbelievers), verily! My Punishment is indeed severe."

lol fi-sab this thread propa put me off marriage lolll now i just wanna go jannah jazakAllah khair!!!! LoL!! serious... this thread is good for your emaan..

lol hur ul 'ayn thing init.. lol u knw why now.



anywayz jazak Allaah khayr n thanks evry1 for your replies 3 mo left.. lol its gna get mo heated up soon me thinks. Allaah knows best.

 

[jzcasejz]

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Well basically...in chapter one...he was your typical Tom/Dick/Harry. Just a normal kiddo I'd say. But then in chapter 2, you realise changes in behaviour and him doing stuff that he wouldn't have done before. So within chapters 1 and 2...there's some noticable changes - but nothing major. It's only in chapter 3 that our lil' man goes all crazy and gets all hyped over the girl. He's paying far too much attention to her and he's somewhat losing control of himself. Not good at all. :X

Something as little as MSN caused a big change within the dude...:skeleton:

Right then fi_sabz, you're close to your 5 now inshaAllaah.

lol hur ul 'ayn thing init.. lol u knw why now.

Did I just hear Huur?!

 

[Nσσя'υℓ Jαииαн]

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Well I'll just summarize. Ok so at the start the kid is definitely unaware of his surroundings a bit, like what msn or what the internet is. Although his Iman isn't as strong enough, he still keeps Allah(swt) in mind seeking help from Him.
He tried avoiding fitnah at first, good for him. But then obviously, curiousity killed the cat and poor kid fell into it. He seems to have forgotten Allah(swt) and that He is definitely watching. I'll just add...it sure does happen to a lot of people. He talks to someone he doesnt even know, takes the step of meeting her and slowly gets attached to her. And this is definitely NOT good. Like Malaikah said, MSN=big fitnah. No questions asked!

Ok we need one more!

 

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kk, y'all been patient fo bare time.. insha Allaah next ones up

 

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What's his name..


u dont know him, dont worry.


ok.

so you like him and stuff?


yeah, he's kool.



how come ur so quiet..


nah its nothin.


ok..


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I opened a new window with the other mate.

She's with someone else man..


is it? i heard that happens alot, they not worth it man, serious.


yeh..

why would she do it though?


i dno, they got their reasons init. never know whats inside a gals head.


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She still hadn't said anything at all yet.. probably chatting to him or something.


I had a proper sad feeling.. like when all the energy from your body drains out. And you feel really hurt, but you feel helpless.


I left, and washed my face with cold water. It was dark now, night. I forced myself to sleep.



I woke up the next morning, couldn't be bothered going to school.


Forcing myself out, got up and left. I don't remember anything at all really. But i came back after a long day.



I came back online, it was a habit now. Logged in.


She was online.

Hey.


howz u?


am k, u?


am gud. listen, i'm gna invite him in a convo with us, tell me what u think of him.


ok.

..has been added into the conversation.

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Hey.


sup, this is my mate. And this is ma guy lol.


sup bruv?


nothin much, u?


s'all gud man.


seeen.


wa u up2 den?


nah nuthin, jus cotchin. u?


yeh, jus flexin init.


k.


k


oi, u2 chat properly loll.


ayt S. so when u2 meet each other?


we linked in town, not from here though. from another endz.


k, safe.

I left the conversation..
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[IbnAbdulHakim]

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i hate that girL! she a BBBBBBBB :anger: