This Is Our Ramadan!!

[Pinkrose]

This is the one i made up!! :thumbs_do :-[

This Is Our Ramadan!!

The Moon Has Been Sighted,
The World Has Been Lighted,
The Muslims Excited,
And All United!!

This is our Ramadan,
A Month Of Blessing,
A Time For Progressing,
An Enjoyment for All!!

We Obey Our Lord,
We Receive A Reward,
Our Iman we’ve Restored,
For Ramadan We’ve Adored!!

This is our Ramadan,
A Month Of Blessing,
A Time For Progressing,
An Enjoyment for All!!

Our Lord Has Blessed Us,
Let’s Not Make A Fuss,
For Allah We Should Impress,
And Never Digress!!

This is our Ramadan,
A Month Of Blessing,
A Time For Progressing,
An Enjoyment for All!!

I really don't like it!! :-[ It's kinda weird soundings isn't it!!?
Maybe i should make it longer!!

 

[nafy]

w/salaamz
dat is ace sis!! seriously........it aint weird lol
its really good!!

 

[Pinkrose]

Jazaakalahu'khayran sis but i really think that my poem is screwed up!! ~lol~

 

[eyes_of_mine]

Salam alykum
Its not screwed up , its very fitting and well written.

 

[Pinkrose]

Jazaakalahu'khayran!!

 

[Khayal]

Nicely written sister, :rose i like it:sister:

Jazak ALLAH khair, dear, 4 sharing..

 

[Ataraxis]

This is the one i made up!! :thumbs_do :-[

This Is Our Ramadan!!

The Moon Has Been Sighted,
The World Has Been Lighted,
The Muslims Excited,
And All United!!

This is our Ramadan,
A Month Of Blessing,
A Time For Progressing,
An Enjoyment for All!!

We Obey Our Lord,
We Receive A Reward,
Our Iman we’ve Restored,
For Ramadan We’ve Adored!!

This is our Ramadan,
A Month Of Blessing,
A Time For Progressing,
An Enjoyment for All!!

Our Lord Has Blessed Us,
Let’s Not Make A Fuss,
For Allah We Should Impress,
And Never Digress!!

This is our Ramadan,
A Month Of Blessing,
A Time For Progressing,
An Enjoyment for All!!

I really don't like it!! :-[ It's kinda weird soundings isn't it!!?
Maybe i should make it longer!!

Wow! That's really good...I like it :loving: Good job It sounds just fine....and I think the size is ok aswell....

 

[Khaldun]

MashAllah its very good amazing, the only thing i would say is, maybe the rhyme scheme is simple? but then again it adds to the effect mashAllah