*To Future Husband* Poem

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Now, see, this beautiful poem motivated me to write my own poem to my future husband with a slight *twist,* mwhahaha, which I hope you'll enjoy (winks).

Dear Mr. Toad,
I'm about to implode,
You're late,
To the joining of our fate,
I'd like to skewer you alive,
And send you on a nosedive,
From the hill,
With my extreme good will,
Unless you apologize,
For making me agonize,
Over any clue,
On when I'll meet you,
And twine fingers,
To the song which lingers,
In my lonely heart,
About my sweetheart,
From the longing I feel,
And love from which I reel,
Having believed in you for so long,
That I can almost feel your arms strong,
Deeply eyes communicating,
That you've too been waiting,
So I may forgive you,
And never bid you adieu,
Even as I stub your toe,
And inside of myself crow,
Since no angel am I,
Though I promise to sigh,
Winking at God,
And be properly awed.

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Wow writing is unique in it's own way, well done ;).

Lol funniest poem I've seen :D.

So if I read it right, it goes to aggressive to soft then sympathetic?
 
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Wow writing is unique in it's own way, well done ;).

Lol funniest poem I've seen :D.

So if I read it right, it goes to aggressive to soft then sympathetic?

Lol, well, after pondering, I did think it would be a little *looks at fingernails* meanie of me to just, oh, you know end it at the part where he nosedives from the hill.
 
Everyone needs to get married on this forum.. Or wait, perhaps I can gift you all with some water? ????????????
 
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I'm not usually a fan of poetry, but that was well written. Talented sister mashaa'Allah.
 

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