Unveiled Feelings

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I was forced to come online seeing that br wakky zakky has replied to my thread.
Im happy u like it brother.

Allah ma3ak
 
wow sis u are really talented mashaAllah.. keep it up
we are all waiting eagerly for the next part
 
Assalamu Alaikum

Mashallah sis, your story is soo beautiful.
I like the way that you use many adjectives to make it sound so heartwarming and sensational. Makes a person feel like they are the character. Something in that story really hit me...

Jazak Allah Khair
Keep writing sis.

Fi Aman Allah
w'salaam
 
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My chin begins to tremble. My eyes fill with tears, my heart begins to drum 10 times its usual. My mouth feels dry and I feel a sensational feeling wrap over me, once again!


I look around and I see many people; different sizes and different shapes. The all look happy, but I am happier than they. Something deep down tells me, they already know.

I look back at the Ka’abah and notice something that I have seen before. It’s the Hajreh Aswad, people are kissing it. I want to kiss it too.
As I begin to move closer, people look at me and move away. The beautiful fragrance grows stronger as my pace quickens.
I touch the Aswad and kiss it. I feel the tears of joy well down my face once again. This time, they feel warm and painful, but I don’t care….I’m happy!

I ask the same; ‘Ya Allah! Why did it take so long?’

Only, I add;
‘Now that my test of patience is over, help me to help others grow patience within them. Help me, Ya Allah to become your loved one. Ya Allah! I want to make you happy. Ya Allah! I have made it to you with your help, help me to help others get here too. Throw off the veil of ignorance from their hearts. Ya Allah! Make me from the Righteous and the Good doers. I love you, Ya Allah! I love you!’

My tears run faster and faster, my words grow stronger and stronger, but I begin to feel weak as I plead for help.

I sit down on the marble, reciting ‘La illah Illa Allah Muhammadar RasoolAllah,’ and slowly begin to feel the strength that was inside me…drain away.
 
salaam
sis that was beautiful...it teared me up. cant wait to hear the next part.
and yes, you are getting better, so please dont put yourself down.
wassalaam
 
salam
mashallah so emotional yet so insprirational
mashallah sis, you really are gifted
jazakallah for sharing
any morecoming in?
wasalam
 
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wow sis..
thats so inspiring, have u written the rest?
:w:
 
salaam
BAD NEWS!!!
Sis Ameeratul Layl has said that the next part of the story may not be published for tomorrow. this is solely due to the amount of coursework and revision on her plate. she may not also reply to the kind words of you all, but she wants you to know that:
i appreciate the kind words. time is precious and if i dont get a grip of it now...it'll be my fault and i'll never want to admit it...yes, it'll haunt me to the max.

wassalaam
 
wow Mashallah thats some amazing writing and very inspirational and beautiful, keep it up

I don't know if this is question is too personal for you but how old are you? if you don't mind saying

you don't have to say if you don't want to but thats some talent, keep it up Mashallah
 
It is really sooooooooooooo nice,may God bless and protect you.
i am waiting for more BuT sooooooooooooooooooooooon,OKAY.
see you my dear friend.
 

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