yeh what?

[truemuslim]

neva mind wat hatas say
ignor em till they fade away


gotta think before i risk my life
i'll take my chance to get my strife
could they do without a knife
i aint mind them, cant start a fight
if they put ther hands on me, alright
otherwise they can talk shia all night
watever else yeh thats tight
i dont mind u ur death he'll write
already did ur outta my sight

im allergic to the counterfeit,
impartial to the politics
never target to ur tricks
inventer of the physics
sho advanced nd basics
i wonder wat this reflects
i shinin star or jus classics
mayb all a lil mix
goin down to deep six
everything no one can fix
mov out the way i got traffics
now u saw me do it wit my rhythmics

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^o) its not even finished, it was gna get good but then .... :exhausted

 

[truemuslim]

actually sounds a biiit wrong if its not "finished"
so here...

now u saw me do it wit my rhythmics

dats wat u can say
dont think ur death will delay
its all bout braggin now, bein in the gang
dunt forget ur hair will fade
to the worste shada grey
ur life'll turn to mid way
yet u forgot who obey
till ur gone ur life'll replay
good nd bad in a way
you'll remember all the ppl u slay
nd how many u sent to x-ray
u had a choice but not ur say
u always stray
ur never straight
shaitans' predator ur the prey

 

[roohani.doctor]

awesome! great job!

~love the last line, "shaitan's the predator you're the prey" ... true true

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

yeh but the other one was muuuuuuuuuch better

dead nd gone :thumbs_up

 

[Na7lah]

your poems are getting aloot better :thumbs_up

 

[truemuslim]

yep dead nd gone was better becasue this ones a lie


ty btw