Looks away from me...

**------** · 10-03-2008

Mujhse har baar wo nazrain chura leta hai "Faraz"
Maine kaghaz par bhi dekhi hain banaa kar aankhain uski

Everytime he looks away from me "Faraz" [the person's name who's writing the poem]
I have drawn his eyes on paper and still he does the same thing

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Aaj uske tassawur ka alam kuch iss tarha tha "Faraz"
Ke neend aayi to aankhon ne bura maan liya

Today the thought of his condition was such
That when I wanted to sleep, my eyes found it ill-mannered of me

[this one sounds sooooo much better in urdu]

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**Soulja Girl** · 10-03-2008

Sad but tis

**IbnAbdulHakim** · 10-03-2008

the feelings of the above is like a person whos intentionally allowing themselves to drown

**Musaafirah** · 10-03-2008

Yaar..that's so depressing..

I hope all gets better for you!

**------** · 10-03-2008

^ How many times lol, I liked the poetry, its not about me!

I just post I find stuff deep! I am NOT going to explain myself again!!!

**------** · 10-03-2008

Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim

the feelings of the above is like a person whos intentionally allowing themselves to drown

Thanks for your nice comment(!) SubhaanAllaah if you don't have anything good to comment, then please don't.
You have to understand Urdu poetry in order to get the deep meaning behind them.

**Musaafirah** · 10-03-2008

Originally Posted by - Serene -

^ How many times lol, I liked the poetry, its not about me!

I just post I find stuff deep! I am NOT going to explain myself again!!!

I know they're not from you but the fact that you're puttin it up and all..it's just depressin..

**IbnAbdulHakim** · 10-03-2008

Originally Posted by - Serene -

Thanks for your nice comment(!) SubhaanAllaah if you don't have anything good to comment, then please don't.
You have to understand Urdu poetry in order to get the deep meaning behind them.

stop letting your emotions take over your mind body and soul

if you analyse my previous comment you'd see that all i did was analyse the poem and interpret it myself, it seems like the woman is clutching onto mysery when she has every power to let it go.

this is my analysis and i have every right to it

SO THERE !!