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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
we gotta stop exposing our bullseyes
clear shots for shaytaan to come reap his prize
he keeps whisperin lies, n it affects our heart
we feelin somethin we shudnt, we fallin apart
so wat do we do, its a catastrophe
we cant take these little problems,
we end up goin on a whining spree,
we're a buncha little hoodlums cant even open our eyes to see,
this lifes full of deception, so i say check yourself and check your intentions...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Try to keep your imaan intact and sky high....
Because there could come a day when you'll dive
Down back to Earth, with all it's problems
I'm sorry, but I have to be honest
It's not like we're perfect, no,
We've got more faults than you can believe,
A kiddo from the ghetto,
Has a more perfect English teeth
Compared to your "practicing" deen...
Eh...
Please, don't hate on me,
Hate on Shaytaaan
He started it, but who's gonna end it?
Me or he, who's going to win this?
All I can say, I wish I knew
I'd seriously hope
It was me and you...
“If only I had checked myself”
—
Guy who wrecked himself
True leaders don't create followers...
.... They create new leaders.
In the land of the forgotten
tired souls lie behind unjust bars...
beaten and humiliated
they're not victims of war...
why then don't the agressors see?
That its innocent until proven guilty
nothing and nobody can ignore the fact
that peace and justice is where it's at!
they will rest from the first step into Jannah...
but when the heat starts beatin i gotta wonda can i?
wheres my seat, jannah or jahanna... naa i dont wanna finish that sentence
hence i keep creatin excuses,
do deeds to start earnin applauses in Allahs court,
heh wat sort of boy am i when i cant even keep things under control,
sometimes feel like a doll on strings,
another stat for the polls strollin through life like it leads nowhere but,
i seek refuge coz im a refugee in Allahs presence
see things gettin intense and im losing all sense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ya Allah guide us... Ameen
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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laughable when your eye to eye,
feelings like my oh my,
temparatures rising and lips getting dry,
ridiculous how hard at times you try,
we kno from the one above the sky,
this lifes a test now dont deny,
friendships turn into relationships now i see you cry,
funny that we been warned from the beautiful lips
of our prophet, may Allah elevate him really high,
feelings are fleeting and desires lead to the fire,
the criers crying out avoid disaster, look straight, see the danger,
you've come as a stranger, 2 second moments arent worth jannah...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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The World is three days: As for yesterday, it has vanished, along with all that was in it. As for tomorrow, you may never see it. As for today, it is yours, so work in it.
- Hassan al-Basri
Slowly slowly I am realising.....the reality of life....
I'm going to die... That's a reality you can't deny.
yesterday I felt immortal,
next time i looked upon the sky I felt death nearby
Somebody gets shoot, another one commits suicide,
Homicide has become a random thing,
Making us all seem as the next victims.
At times I feel as blood never will stop flowing,
Turning away to stop mourning
Making me realize how much is going on in this dunya,
What a small part a play,
How many pages are left to turn?
The book is near it's end,
I still will have to pay my debts,
Must stop to sin and get going some halal things.
I won't escape, nobody will
Maffia, terrorists,
Nonsense talking politics,
Everything will come to an end,
The limits will cross their lines,
Doors to two worlds will open up and welcome you in,
All I can say my friend,
This is the promise of the end.
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“If only I had checked myself”
—
Guy who wrecked himself
True leaders don't create followers...
.... They create new leaders.
^ i found that scary ... but i liked it mashaAllah..
treasure every single second as if its your last
dont know when deaths hands will touch diminishing our past
time spent will now be realised, fruitful? fruitless?
our time we compromised
too much, its such that we let ourselves go
lost sight of whats important, fakely calling each others bro
this poetry has purpose, you will come to know
when 6 feet under, surely, u will come to know...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Allaah has creates us insaan for one purpose
We must keep our emaan faith and realise our status
A temporary abode, a temporary state
to Allah we'll return, decided is the date..
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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I dont think I'l be able to rhyme this but I just wanted to say...Allah should be sufficient for us, I can't count the number of times I've been SO close to losing hope, but then think...Allah KNOWS...how can I doubt that, and if He knows...its obvious He's not giving me this calamity without reason, He's making me undergo it for a reason, and maybe that reason is to give you a better akhiraah Insha'Allah.
Sheikh, Imaam Anwar al Awlaki, hafidha hullah, had stated that Allah subhanahu wa ta'ala places burden upon burden upon a believer, test after test, this is not to grieve the believer ! rather it is to build a case for him so that in yawmal qiyaamah he will have much evidence to enter the highest of jannatul firdaus.
Allah places luxury upon luxury upon a disbeliever, he is covered by dunya, this is not because Allah loves him, rather it is to build a case against him, so that he goes to akhirah and see;s nothing, as he had it all in dunya.
Allah built a case against firawn to throw him in the depths of fire, when a man stabs a messenger, or an awliyaa like Umar radhiallahu anhu, it is a case to send umar to the highest jannah, and firawn to the lowest of hellfire (aswell as the one who stabbed umar radhiallahu anhu)
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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to Allah we'll return, decided is the date..
I know I've gotta be strong, but i keep thinking it might be too late...
A massive sinner, how will Allaah forgive me?
A massive winner, by Allaah swt's mercy....
Disobeying Allaah day by day, Why do some people go Astray From the path of truth...?!
Who do people go astray?
It's coz we've been created in such a way
that we make mistakes, this flawed creation
commiting sins without hesitation
But the best of sinners i think is he
Who makes mistakes...
But repents with sincerity
vowing never to make the same mistake
Praise Allah every morning he wakes...
to Allah we'll return, decided is the date..
I know I've gotta be strong, but i keep thinking it might be too late...
A massive sinner, how will Allaah forgive me?
A massive winner, by Allaah swt's mercy....
Disobeying Allaah day by day, Why do some people go Astray From the path of truth...?!
Why do some people go Astray From the path of truth...?!
you must realise Allahs mercy has no limit
your sins are a drop in the oceans of his infinite
taubah is your key to success
emaan is the dress so wear it...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Sheikh, Imaam Anwar al Awlaki, hafidha hullah, had stated that Allah subhanahu wa ta'ala places burden upon burden upon a believer, test after test, this is not to grieve the believer ! rather it is to build a case for him so that in yawmal qiyaamah he will have much evidence to enter the highest of jannatul firdaus.
Allah places luxury upon luxury upon a disbeliever, he is covered by dunya, this is not because Allah loves him, rather it is to build a case against him, so that he goes to akhirah and see;s nothing, as he had it all in dunya.
Allah built a case against firawn to throw him in the depths of fire, when a man stabs a messenger, or an awliyaa like Umar radhiallahu anhu, it is a case to send umar to the highest jannah, and firawn to the lowest of hellfire (aswell as the one who stabbed umar radhiallahu anhu)
Look at the prophets, they went through sooo much subhanAllah! but not because Allah hated them! Laa! no! rather the opposite! So, Whatever you go through, its because Allah loves you and wants better for, and Allah does not overburden any soul.
let it rain
on your skin,
dont ask why...
for the state ur in
take it as it is
add patience to ur patience.
hes holding ur life-
in his hands is ur existence.
give him more than just words-
show him u are glad
to embrace all good and all bad...
all is from him..all is for u.
now go and be happy
this life was not for misery
but serenity...
breath in all halal
expel the haraam
keep him at heart and mind
and you shall be his pride.
peace.
"'Cause I hear the whispered words
In your masterpiece beautiful
You speak the unspeakable through
I love you too"
let it rain
on your skin,
dont ask why...
for the state ur in
take it as it is
add patience to ur patience.
hes holding ur life-
in his hands is ur existence.
give him more than just words-
show him u are glad
to embrace all good and all bad...
all is from him..all is for u.
now go and be happy
this life was not for misery
but serenity...
breath in all halal
expel the haraam
keep him at heart and mind
and you shall be his pride.
let it rain
on your skin,
dont ask why...
for the state ur in
take it as it is
add patience to ur patience.
hes holding ur life-
in his hands is ur existence.
give him more than just words-
show him u are glad
to embrace all good and all bad...
all is from him..all is for u.
now go and be happy
this life was not for misery
but serenity...
breath in all halal
expel the haraam
keep him at heart and mind
and you shall be his pride.
peace.
such talent, if you wrote that then i think you may be the best poet on this forum. MashaAllah
assalamu alaikum wa rahmatullah
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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