Freestyle Poetry Thread

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Musaafir said:
I like the one before the mr. bean poem of yours Mz, you know the one on the page before that you said to read fast. Tried reading it real fast and it sounds good Masha'allah. At least it's rap with meaning. And yeah as sis Jolie mentioned what doesn't touch one's heart can touch other people. Like One man's rubbish is another man's treasure, but then that doesn't really REALLY relate here does it? :-\
Freestyles good, but am useless, I like reading other peoples ones.
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i heard rubbish! :p


nah jizakAllah khair, i did have a flow/beat intended for it

it goes with my accent


im sure everyones freestyle is written to compliment their accents
 

why why why Why WHYYYY
do these tears keep
keep droppin
sins keep croppin
people keep flippin sikenin me
likenin to whinin tryina
find any crime
n justify like its fine
ignore every warnin n sign
I FEEL
ends dawnin
PEOPLE START MOURNIN
cud b burnin
twistin n turnin
neva in ease
always hurtin
u dnt wanna b there
right now
got it easy
squeeze a lemon
take life like a lesson
adressin u
ignore the rest
look to yourself
reflect n perfect!




:exhausted
 
I got lost after the 1st 3 lines. Nice :thumbs_up Masha'Allah!
 
Ok I just read it again. Its pretty kool actually. I just stopped at tears for some reason.
 
i liked it :) :thumbs_up
hmm noticed that i haven't written a poem for a while :hmm:
 
:sl:
How about for the people with couplets they made? I might start a Couplet Thread please post you couplets there:)
 
Mz said:

why why why Why WHYYYY
do these tears keep
keep droppin
sins keep croppin
people keep flippin sikenin me
likenin to whinin tryina
find any crime
n justify like its fine
ignore every warnin n sign
I FEEL
ends dawnin
PEOPLE START MOURNIN
cud b burnin
twistin n turnin
neva in ease
always hurtin
u dnt wanna b there
right now
got it easy
squeeze a lemon
take life like a lesson
adressin u
ignore the rest
look to yourself
reflect n perfect!




:exhausted
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im jealous. i cant rap n rhyme.
and the fact that i didnt know u did it so well still pisses me the hell off!
 
^ lol give it a go sis. I'm sure I've seen some of your poems...unless I'm mistaking you for somebody else, they were amazing.
 
Mz said:
who said you cant?
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i dno. i dont even trust that my usual poetry is good..wallahi i only started sharing with you guys a lil while ago..never before..hardly ever anywhere else..

to think of rapping is LOL..

i'll try..and i'll pm it to you guys..if its good, i'll post it up...

sound ok?
 
sevgi said:
i dno. i dont even trust that my usual poetry is good..wallahi i only started sharing with you guys a lil while ago..never before..hardly ever anywhere else..

to think of rapping is LOL..

i'll try..and i'll pm it to you guys..if its good, i'll post it up...

sound ok?
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try it sis i'd love to see what u come up with :D
 
mashallah the way you compile words together with precision its immaculate!!!!!!!!!...mashallah
 
lol barakallah fik :D U like using good vocabulary huh :thumbs_up
 
hav u eva spoken
in tears been soakin
sayin to ur soul
i think ur broken
sleepin
plz wake up
wivout u im cold so
plz wake up
i got no warmth
i go no one
wivout you wiv me
for sure im dun

whys it dyin,
whats killin it
my sweet emaan..
whats been drillin it?
for ages now i tried fillin it
but its upside down
theres no fillin it...

im wishing everyday
my emaan gnna comebak this day
shaytaan gnna finally go away..
Shaytaan plz.. go away ! ...
 
whys it dyin,
whats killin it
my sweet emaan..
whats been drillin it?
for ages now i tried fillin it
but its upside down
theres no fillin it...

im wishing everyday
my emaan gnna comebak this day
shaytaan gnna finally go away..
Shaytaan plz.. go away ! ...
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it has a slower pace than your normal ones lol
i love the last part! May Allah strengthen our iman Ameen
 
here i was:(,caught up in the boxing ring
humungous scary fellow with horns,im too scared i cannot think
i physically feel weary and hollow,feeling like a quietus leaf being pushed around by a ferocious wind...even spit i couldn't swallow:(
the bell rings
DI DI DING DING!
the tension
i try to clinch my fists but i can feel the gripping absence of my tendons
the other dude is fictionally redundant-
in ability,
one sledge hammer of a left hook in my vicinity
as i drop my sweat shudders
close to concussion my brain bounces like rubber
My consious friend
comes along and slowly counts to ten
and between each number was an encouragement
somehow i grew stronger
the term of my vision went from short to longer
i could see more clearer
i think im ready now as he draws nearer
i supplicated
and with one blessed punch i had him temporarily eradicated:)
 

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