Freestyle Poetry Thread

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That was profound sis
 
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Excuse moi

If I find a rap, a poem, sum lines of freestly offensive I will say so. If people are going to use foul language and ruin something that has the potential to be beautiful I will say so.

Take it for granted.
 
JolieFleur said:
Excuse moi

If I find a rap, a poem, sum lines of freestly offensive I will say so. If people are going to use foul language and ruin something that has the potential to be beautiful I will say so.

Take it for granted.
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OK you have the right to say whatever you want,i will just see what advice i can deduce from whatever you say and i will be more be careful of what rhymes i post and what i include in them:thumbs_up
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J.U.N.I.O.R said:
OK you have the right to say whatever you want,i will just see what advice i can deduce from whatever you say and i will be more be careful of what rhymes i post and what i include in them:thumbs_up
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JazakAllah khayr. I know what you're reffering to bro, but I dont think you saw the posts that have been deleted...only the ones that have been left.

Continue the freestyle insha'Allah. Yours are a pleasure to read
 
its like i waited my whole life
all for this one night
nd u play me wit it
when to me u give it
then take it from me
leavin me blindly
hopin for u to notice me
its like my ownself is deadly
with my heart bein empty
because love i got falsely
but i still wanna worship u
since im worth no value
nd hopin for ur rescue
even after my head u slew
but after this i given up
all the music i had given up
nd now my faith i've given up
nd music im not giving up
u wanna help my faith build up
or leave it to break up
but for me, i can no longer stand up
coz my soul u've blown up

:/
 
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its like i waited my whole life
all for this one night
nd u play me wit it
when to me u give it
then take it from me
leavin me blindly
hopin for u to notice me
its like my ownself is deadly
with my heart bein empty
because love i got falsely
but i still wanna worship u
since im worth no value
nd hopin for ur rescue
even after my head u slew
but after this i given up
all the music i had given up
nd now my faith i've given up
nd music im not giving up
u wanna help my faith build up
or leave it to break up
but for me, i can no longer stand up
coz my soul u've blown up

:/
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mayb i read it wrong ^o)
 
wats wit the negitivity?
wat happened to gangstitity
u say its all u've seen
but cmon u not even in between
soul is stolen, no mo serene
speaken of which wheres -serene- ?
 
ayyo answers we have
will they listen
cancerous-
a way of thinking thats suicidal,preposterous
they dont hear us
we are too backward they cant bare us
playing with fire
loss of belief in the deity up higher
pornographic like tv shows
lucifer strikes a pose-
in their minds and the room for realization is closed
bad influence influx
problems they daily create they try to daily tackle, what a paradox!
in hackles,it irritates me worse than chicken pox
teenage pregnancy
inadequate discrepancy?
looks like no one is disagreeing..so whats their view?
'its a taboo':-\:enough!:
Children who are illegaly born
grow up and go about their ''business'' illicitly to make illegal carbon-copy kids that are reborn
the cycle continues
so what can we deduce
its embedded in their parentage
thats why the high percentage!!!!!!!!!
 
The cat
sat on the mat

it ate a rat
and got more fat

it's name was nat
but changed to Matt

once it saw a rat
and gave it a pat
charged it with v.a.t
stole it's shiny hat
and...

continued to sit on his mat









*clapping*




^^^^^^^^^
AWESOME CREATIVE ORGANICALLY RETARDED POEM
__________________
 
Bambii! nah lol dont worry am not gna steal that :p


_______________________

i won that fight, i lost that war
i can still se my life walkin out that door
who ever thought i'd se this world no mo
got enough dear homiez i dont want no mo


:/
 
safe to say i paved the way for u jokes to get paid today
amazin u aint grateful now wat do i hav to say
u shoulld be thinkin is ther a way for u to possibly repay
i guess its jus they nd forever to sway away
even if i back away nd forever on stayed away
you'd say am hatin all the day everyday
but homie u in the wrong cafe this wher ppl stay straight
u forever on gna complain till u shade to grey

___

lol my rhymes to haters never run out. i can rap to haters forever :p
 
rap till u seventy
still no catchin me
yo am n element
knowin that intelligent
i come from the future yet am ancient
i both a begga nd a merchant
follow my steps
if u want success
yo i was here first, am christopher columbus
yall jus the pilgrims!



k that was jus a refresh :p now back to real rhymes

ran to two three guys wanna start sumthin
they start hatin
u start playin
but now u gushin, ambulan rushin
u to the hospital wita bad concussion
paralyzed waist down gna hit yo spine
nevermind that now u lucky to be alive
...

ahh headache...heres wher i stop :enough!:
beside it feels like am rappin wit myself nd killin this thread :-[
 
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what the hell this is gettin jarrin
with the same old lyrical sparrin
starrin wannabe's who shudnt even b carin
stop flarin like u been starin
death in the face like ur the last of a race
facin extinction, man thats waste

if ur readin this
read it fast paced
its a bro tryna keep things chaste
but i keep gettin mazed, im mazed at things
wannabe thugz for respect n blingz
like they cool the way they messin
wiv peoples lives raping n sh....
u wanna be bad yeh? wanna be black?
then go n get shot like tupac....
 
Its me again back on the board
spamming on all LI ports
rapping about all sorts
unique stuff you dont like it then get stuffed
or else you'll leave with your face puffed-
up
salam holla... wussup?
sister you re name's true
so keep true
typing up raps all the way from the red,white and blue
speaking live and well
causing more buzz than a behive,locked in this cell-
called earth
from the time get... set ...ready BIRTH!
So keep it real
and hater keep you're eyes peeled
 
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^ that was awesom lol u kilt me! :p xcept i didnt get the first three lines ...r u dissin??? ( was at ibnabdulhakim... ) nd junior lol ur raps are awesome!


my life aint for u entertainment
u dont watch me while i live it
i aint for ur amusement
i dont care bout ur judgement

try nd walk a mile in my shoes
you'll se i aint here to amuse
so understand this is who i am
dont expect nutin less of me
coz this gna stay like this till the death of me
 
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I aint dead
I aint done
I aint scared
I aint run
But still i stand
No matterr what people here i am
No matter what remember
I aint break
I aint fold
They hate me mo’ (so!)
Yeah I know…
Here I go


Neva have ya seen in ya lifetime
A more devine eastern rapper wit the flesh like mine
Facin all kind of time
But smile like im fine

You let the blog sites and the magazines tell it
Im sho to be in jail till 2027
Rather see me in a cell in
Stead of this new McLaren
God'll take you through hell just to get you to heaven
Grin and still bear it
Win and still share it

Life can change ya directions
Even when you aint planned it
All you can do is handle it
The worst thing you could do is panic
Use it to your advantage

Make impossible possible
Even when winnings illogical
Losing's still far from optional
Yeah they wanna see you shot up in the hospital
But one life throw punches, block ya counter like a boxer
Been locked inside mi casa too long



sorry wayyy too long :-[ my brains malfunctioning today :-[:-[:-[
 

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