Freestyle Poetry Thread

[Cabdullahi]

here goes nothing >>> http://www.yousendit.com/download/Y2orT215eFVwTVZFQlE9PQ

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ lol bro i liked it !

hmm i heard it twice lol, its good ! i love freestyles wivout music!!!!!!
not much out there though,.... hmm... gives me an idea... should i...



should i - speak out for LI
may i - spit lyrics
to show im fully fledged and not semi
if i - try my best ingest meanings to impress n get blessed
do you - think this man can send messages with more feeling
appealing more greatly sincerely dealing out my dawah
coz we kno inshAllah im doin it ALL FOR ALLAAH...

hmm

 

[Cabdullahi]

mashallah thats a superb short rhyme!!!!!!!

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

u kno bro i remixed nasheeds with a few lyrics before lol but i just done it as a joke


i dont think i should post those unless i wanna look like a retard ;D

 

[Cabdullahi]

come on! it will be cool,i dont want to be the only one that posted a recording,you post one too plzz, then we can both be retards,instead of just me

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ how bout i jus pm you instead :-[

 

[Cabdullahi]

yeah that would be cool!!!

 

[x-strawberry-x]

that is extremely good junior mashallah u have talent did u make it all up

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

for real ahmedjunior, that recording has NICE lyrics!! oh:

 

[Cabdullahi]

thanks brother,i hope i dont get infractions

 

[x-strawberry-x]

omg lol

 

[Cabdullahi]

ffended:whats funny????

 

[Cabdullahi]

another one>>>>http://www.yousendit.com/download/Y2orNWNqTSt0d0d4dnc9PQ

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

thas kool bro !!

 

[sevgi]

i'd like to try rappin' with the spelling and all..lol..that'd be something

 

[Obi97_Abdul]

Very good. Mashallah

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i'd like to try rappin' with the spelling and all..lol..that'd be something

yeh it really would :uuh:




never slow down once whilst readin this
if u wanna feel this rhymes intended bliss

so freeeeestyyyyyyyyyyle
i aint dun it in a while
too busy wrapped up -
mudathir
but i aint gone kafir
my body's in one place
my hearts a musaafir
always travelling feeling to feeling
state to state
heart n mind jus dont corrolate
coz the mind thinks this whilst the heart wants that
both going crazy - loose like a gat
now im freestyling or freethinking
overtime everytime deeply linking
that which i feel
to that which im seekin

how many of us keep leavin our feets up
movin so fast jus tryna keep up
coz this beat so hectic
teenages shoutin brrrraaaap
never freeze coz life is jus a trap

make sure u keep movin
improving
if ur endz get corrupt
move to tootin

on the run
till the day we die
cud b today
boy jus wanna cry

so dont b sly wiv this life
u cant trick this life
u cant dodge the strife
coz hereafters the truth




lol looool this ones so terrible

 

[Re.TiReD]

lol looool this ones so terrible

It's not ^

Why is this thread making me sigh *scratches head*

Fab masha'Allah

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ jizakAllah khair lil liar ;D



no really, jizakAllah khair, it wasnt really from the heart is why i thought its terrible

 

[Re.TiReD]

Hey what doesnt touch one heart can always touch another brother.

my body's in one place
my hearts a musaafir
always travelling feeling to feeling
state to state
heart n mind jus dont corrolate
coz the mind thinks this whilst the heart wants that
both going crazy - loose like a gat
now im freestyling or freethinking
overtime everytime deeply linking
that which i feel
to that which im seekin

BarakAllah feek