The Path that led me to Allaah. - A Prequel to the heart-break series -

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I'm not sure.. did everyone think that was a bad way to end it?
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Oh man, you screwed the ending up a bit bro. You should've ended it with somert like, "and here I am now, reading the book of Allaah, my past completely behind me". Or somert like "I made du'aa for A, and asked Allaah forgiveness for my sins and wrongdoings over the years and wept, it was in the morning, before fajr". Well I'm a crap writer so my choice of words is pretty rubbish, but I think u know what I mean, u shud've mentioned a final chapter on his practising his deen, coz then the non practising bro's/ sis's will look differently towards practising people, the story will benefit them more, if you get what I mean?

In fact you could even ask the bro what he did do in his first few days/weeks/months of practising properly, i'm sure there'll be something beneficial you cud finish the story off with thats true as well.

Seriously, I think one more chapter at least should be added bout his practising life, it'll really hit the nail on the head.

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The word path doesn't include his practicing life. This should be a completely different book.
 
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Jazaak Allaah khayr everyone for the ideas :) i think i finished it off quicker because people thought it was dragging on too much..
 
Assalaamu Alaikuum Warahamaatul Lahi Wabarakaatuh


veryy veryyy veryyy nice storyy ..

is it finished???????? .. wel dunt say YES
Coz im really excited i really want 2 knw wat is gonna happen...

Waliykum Salaaam Warahamatul Lahi Wabarakaatuh​
 
Wow thts it i read the whole story yesterday y did u finish it up so quickly? When r u writing another one?
 
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I'm thinking if i should continue this one or start up something else.. lots of the 'transforming' parts of the plot are mentioned in the plot, so i think that's ok insha Allaah since that's what the stories supposed to be about.


I want to write up another type of thing, i need everyones opinions since alot of you are viewing this thread already;


Name a few locations/experiences you would like to go to in any time period, i just need some ideas insha Allaah. :)
 
Salmaualikum.
So we have done about 'fake love'

Lets do something which many people have asked in 'cyber.....' ? Inshallah that will be good.

Ma'assalama
 
I wanna see some more action,fighting.Or you can do about his life, he gets into some trouble with the law, goes to prison, thinks about his life and all the wrong things he's done, and decides to change. And when he comes out he starts doing dawah and bringin people back to islam.

what u think. would be an Iteresting read.
 
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Something about how he might leave Music maybe? I dunno, just an idea :hiding:
 
nuj said:
salamunalaikum,

sooo.....this is the end eh? rly good story buuuuuuttt, i prefered ur other one, its had thousands of lessons init...the err 'what to do if ur friend gets heart broken' or sumthing...

nwy nice going. i just love reading the verses of the Qur'an, subhanallah its amazing how much it is linked to our lifes. when i hav a bad day, a day of sadness or a day where i need urgent guidance i turn to Qur'an and it always calms my soul and helps me make my decisions. The Noble Qur'an is Noble indeed...

and there i go off in a rant...lol

nwy jazakallah bro for the story, may Allah reward u in this world and in the hereafter and may your intentions always remain true...may ALL our intentions remain pure!

-Ameen.
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I left this in story form because people can extract their own personal lessons from it, whereas the other sequel is supposed to be the facts, and anyone who wants to read them can check it out inshaa Allaah.


Bro Abu yahya, i'll try working on a final chapter.. if i can insha Allaah.


And everyone else, insha Allaah i'll try to work on something.. but i don't know yet, i'm not really good with imagination.


Thanks and may Allaah reward you all again, ameen. :)



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Fi_Sabilillah said:
In the end, K got married to the gurl he wanted.. he started practising Islaam aswell, he met with the Imaam in the Masjid. Their family sorted the whole issue out, and insha Allaah (God willing) him and his gurl live happily ever after - in a legit and good way... your friends truelly do make a difference on who you are...




I smiled, after ages. And then i walked forward.. towards Allaah.


Allah says: ​


“Whosoever does right, whether male or female, and is a believer, we shall make them live a good life, and We shall pay them a recompense in proportion to the best of what they used to do.”​


[Qur'an Sûrah al-Nahl: 97]​

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^ Alhamdulillaah..that was good Bro. JazakAllaah Khayr...
 

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